Sports in 2050 will be one of the practices most used for people of all
conditions to improve their health and too for increasing their self-esteem. In thirty four years one of the most popular sports will be running, which will evolvup
to fully control our activity. Other popular sports that will be basketball
and football that will evolve that appear other sports. For example quiddich that will be very popular sport among the young people.
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One of the sports mentioned above, football, will not need referees. They will be replace by robots, which will not fail during games. Also the Robots will play a match against the champion of the world cup. Which I bet that the robots beat to the world cup champion.
Another also popular
sport will be basketball, it will be controlled by the technology and will put a chip to control inside the balloon for control when the ball enters in the basket. Besides side in this sport will implemented the four points beacuse of the record and the legacy from Stephen Curry. That will be better than Michael Jordan.
In conclusion , sports will change a lot in the next thirty four years for the advances technological. This advanes will involve in the emergence of new sports for example the quidich. Moreover the rules will change in a lot sports. This rules will have a great control thanks to the intelligence artificial that replace to the current refrees.
In conclusion , sports will change a lot in the next thirty four years for the advances technological. This advanes will involve in the emergence of new sports for example the quidich. Moreover the rules will change in a lot sports. This rules will have a great control thanks to the intelligence artificial that replace to the current refrees.
I'm sorry Alejandro, I posted some comments but they didn't register. It was a lot of work, actually, so I'll try to summarise. You use past tenses when you should use future ones, like in the last paragraph. Also check SPELLING mistakes -charge or change?- WORD ORDER and SENTENCES -they need to be shorter- PUNCTUATION -you need to use FULL STOPS to separate sentences. Please, try again.
ReplyDeleteOK, you still haven't checked your post, we will probably do it in class next day...
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ReplyDeleteOK, I'll have a look at it ASAP.
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ReplyDeleteNot bad, Alejandro. There are still some word order and vocabulary errors, but it will do. Thank you!
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