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In the future, electronics will be present in most fields from medicine, domotic, industry, communication, also in human routine life. Electronic circuits will be made with graphene. This material will permit to have complexes forms.
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Holograms will be utilized for many applications, for example, in applications
communications. The device will create a hologram menu, and the user will be able to interact with the device.
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Computers will be destined to be used by many users at the same time. Computers will use interactive hologram. Artificial intelligence will be used in domotic houses. This will store all our preferences for a better service.
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Electronics is present in the robotic field. This field will be revolutionized in control of movement, artificial vision and humanization of robots. In the industry, robots will work in all dangerous tasks.
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In conclusion, electronics field will become a basic and important science in 2050. Electronics designed will be used for a more comfortable and easy life.
"will be most fields". Will be present in most fields?
ReplyDelete" graphene, this..." Consider using a full stop here.
"The hologram will..." Better use the plural: "Holograms will..."
"communications, the device..." Again, maybe a full stop is better here.
"the user will can to interact..." We can't use two modals: "the user will BE ABLE to interact..."
"The computers will be desined to be used by many users in same time." Don't use "the" for general statements. Also, SPELLING and VOCABULARY. Consider: "Computers will be destined to be used by many users at the same time.
"...the hologram interactive." WORD ORDER.
"The artificial intelligence will be used in domotic houses, this will store all our preferencesfor a better service." Check my previous comments and decide how to better this.
"Other evolution field and that it is presented the electronics, it is the robotic." Try to simplify this.
"... the robots will be worked..." Why PASSIVE voice?
Better "Will become a basic... in 2050". Keep it simple!
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ReplyDeleteOK, Salva, much better. Please, revise your post again and consider omitting some instances of "the". Also, check this article -http://writtent.com/blog/the-honor-code-of-a-noble-blogger-how-to-cite-pictures/- on how to cite a picture in a blog. We'll discuss it in class too.
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ReplyDeleteVery good job. Thank you Salva!
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