We always have wondered how
the cars will be in the future, will they fly? Will they work alone?
Cars have changed
very much in the last decade, but not so much like in order that they fly in
2050. And they are not equal to the futurist vehicles of the movies.
2050 |
2000 |
Environmentally
friendly cars
All new cars to be zero
emissions vehicles, to achieve this, cars includes battery electric,
plug-in hybrid and hydrogen fuel cell vehicles.
New
materials
In the future we will be able
to use materials like Nitride of rennet and silicon carbide for their use in
electrical and hybrid vehicles.
Automatic
driving
False |
very good post Ricardo, very interesting.
ReplyDelete"Always we have wondered". Revise word order. Where do we place adverbs of frequency?
ReplyDeleteRemember how we use "the" in English: "The cars have changed..." is a general statement. No need for "the".
"And they not be equal to the futurist..." Present simple of the verb "to be": "And they are not like the futuristic..."
Please revise future tenses and word order -adjectives before nouns- in this paragraph: "All new cars to be zero emissions vehicles, to achieve this, cars includes battery electric, plug-in hybrid and hydrogen fuel cell vehicles."
In "New materials" paragraph, since you mention different new materials, we need plural reference: " for his use ...", should be "for their use".
Last paragraph: "Automatic driving... The automobile in 2050.." Word order and "the": In 2050, automobiles..."
Last but not least, cite your pictures please.