Here, I'm going to introduce some predictions about flying in the future:
The planes of the future will have zones dedicated to relaxing and playing games, panoramic windows and seats that collect our body heat to power in-cabin features, according to Airbus.
Predicting what travel will be like in 2050, the plane
passengers will be able to relax in massage seats that also serve drinks and
vitamins as needed and provide either a sea breeze or a scent of fresh pine and sound showers will ease passengers into the
perfect sleep, snug in the warm embrace of special shades to keep out the
light.
For those who prefer a view, the plane will be made up
of panoramic windows, which can become transparent at the wave of a hand or
remain opaque in certain areas thanks to an integrated neural network which can
detect and respond to the specific needs of each passenger.
The cabin's bionic
structure will be based on the bone structure of a bird to keep it light but
strong.
It would then be
coated with a biopolymer membrane, which controls the amount of natural light,
humidity and temperature, providing opacity or transparency on command and
eliminating the need for windows.
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Please, introduce the post with some general statement about travel in the future. For instance, you can write that you are going to introduce some predictions for flying in the future.
ReplyDeletePlease revise GRAMMAR in "which controls the amount of natural light..., "
"some predictions about flaying". Did you mean "flying"?
ReplyDeleteDo not start a paragraph with "And". It it is part of the same idea of facilities and commodities, keep the sentence in the same paragraph and start with "Moreover" or "Furthermore". If you want to refer to a different idea/theme, start a new paragraph with "On the other hand".
Remember to cite your pictures the way we said in class.
"at the wave or a hand" or "at the wave OF a hand"?